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VileWolf
February 20th, 2012, 03:20 AM
The Book of Ark
http://undead.darkbb.com/t170-ark-s-story-from-the-beginning

The book of Krell
http://undead.darkbb.com/t115-krells-log-1
http://undead.darkbb.com/t181-chronicles-of-krell

The Book Necrul
http://undead.darkbb.com/t177-necrul-revenge

The Book of Vile Wolf
http://undead.darkbb.com/t168-night-wolf-the-creation

The Book Vottic
http://undead.darkbb.com/t182-vottics-tale

Muy
February 22nd, 2012, 04:43 PM
Excellent reads. :D

Arkerenos
February 22nd, 2012, 06:50 PM
Glad you liked them. Check back periodically for updates on them. I'll try and put mine out a bit quicker. I just have a habit of writing way too much >.<

JChronic
February 23rd, 2012, 12:44 AM
There was a lot to read but the bit i did look through was very good, glad to see things like this!

worll the scribe
February 24th, 2012, 02:49 PM
vile wolf: the intro is fitting to your name! starting with a rape scene that births a badass; could have been a bit more explicit for my tastes, though ;)
pretty good character development through tragic events.

krell:
cool idea - a twist on the classic amnesia story.
"You will be known of as Krell the Decaptator" lol awesome
"her body was left hanging on the tree branch upside down still driping her internal soul out onto the ground" i wish you could do that in uo

ark: i like your construction. it's easy to read and 'flows' well.
The pack only had a few cloth bandages, an unlit candle, an empty book, and now a dagger which he returned to the front pocket.
good use of uo lore.
Ark made it only a single step in the door and coughed up blood on the closest customer.
lol nasty
is that Kraton at the end?

Arkerenos
February 24th, 2012, 06:34 PM
Haha no actually, it isn't Kraton. You'll just have to wait for the next few installments to find out =D.

Flagg
February 25th, 2012, 04:48 PM
Good stuff man. And thanks, reading your stuff helped get the inspiration going for me and I finally figured out the next part of a story I am currently writing. After spending the last 5 days stuck in the mud. Will be interested to see what happens next for these three.

VileWolf
February 28th, 2012, 06:21 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read these guys.

Drayvock
March 1st, 2012, 07:55 AM
The book of Krell
http://undead.darkbb.com/t115-krells-log-1

I miss Vortimis. :(

Great reads! Thanks for linking them!

VileWolf
March 5th, 2012, 10:20 PM
There has been more links added and up dates

Arkerenos
March 10th, 2012, 09:36 PM
Ark's third installment is up. I need to stop writing so much in my posts lol. >.<